Calling England: help, please?

[shadowscast]

I see it's been over two months since I posted Chapter 2 of "That Good Night." Eep. I'm sorry!

Believe it or not, I've finally written Chapter 3! I've just sent it off to my beta reader. But here's the thing: in this chapter, for the first time, I switch into Spike's POV. Since I'm Canadian and my beta reader is American, I'd really like someone to Britpick the text before I post it. Would anyone be willing?

Comments

[trepkos.livejournal.com]

Sure, if you don't get a better offer.

[shadowscast.livejournal.com]

speakr2customrs has offered too, so I'll take advantage of him this time (since I've done the opposite-side-of-the-Atlantic equivalent for him in the past). But, thanks for the offer, and thanks for not giving up on me in my long silence!

[speakr2customrs.livejournal.com]

I'd be happy to do it.

[shadowscast.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I'll take you up on it!

For simplicity's sake, I've just posted it, filtered to be visible to you alone.

[punksta1978.livejournal.com]

Ohhh, I can't wait! I've been refreshing my friends page maniacally looking for updates, when I realized that I never left commentary on the last chapter. I'm off to fix that, but I just wanted to peak my head in and let you know how excited I am about the forthcoming update and how intrigued I am by the POV switch.

[shadowscast.livejournal.com]

It's up now; I hope you enjoy it!

Also, after my long hiatus I'm really very grateful to hear that anyone's still interested in the next chapter, so thanks very much for this comment!