ext_23044 ([identity profile] anjanka7.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] shadowscast 2005-11-23 10:43 pm (UTC)

::snicker:: Giles has a sense of humor. I liked that, it was funny.
I liked this whole story. Genius idea, the whole Dawn thing rewriting the timeline. I had a moment of panic when the rock disappeared, and then I was so upset with you making Xander become an asshole all of a sudden and then realized it was the demon and was so proud of you for doing such a good job of it. Also, your working through of Xander's insecurities over it was great.
Loved back a few parts when they ran into everyone and they were confused and mean and Dawn had to do the spell. Loved the redo of the battle on the hellmouth, with the chaos and all that. This was a great story : )

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